[writing] Alliteration failure

Important safety tip: sometimes it’s just not a good idea to say what comes into your head. From this early morning’s work on Tourbillon:

Her approval thrilled Boaz, sending an unexpected crackle through his crystals.

Don’t you just love it when something sends a crackle through your crystals?

One thought on “[writing] Alliteration failure

  1. tetar says:

    Ahha, the metal man’s mettle is melting, is it? If he only had a heart…

    Running with the Oz allusions; cool.

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