[writing] Progris riport, day 10, revising Pinion

Down to 168,800 today, plus lots of nitty stuff done. Not quite as tight as I’d hoped (165,000) but at least I broke below 170,000. Plus went on some booger patrols. Tomorrow I’m on to another pass for continuity fixes and deeper line edits, with a goal of 160,000 when I send it off to , and my readers.